
inspired by Fandango’s One Word Challenge (FOWC) of 21 January 2022, repetitive.
When a hung over sailor called Bill,
Met an opera singer rather shrill,
He said “If you pipe down
I’ll give all that I own”,
And the girl replied, “okay, I will”
When a hung over sailor called Bill,
Met an opera singer rather shrill,
He said “If you pipe down
I’ll give all that I own”,
And the girl replied, “okay, I will”
When a hung over sailor called Bill,
Met an opera singer rather shrill,
He said “If you pipe down
I’ll give all that I own”,
And the girl replied, “okay, I will”
When a hung over sailor called Bill,
Met an opera singer rather shrill,
He said “If you pipe down
I’ll give all that I own”,
And the girl replied, “okay, I will”
When a hung over sailor called Bill,
Met an opera singer rather shrill,
He said “If you pipe down
I’ll give all that I own”,
And the girl replied, “okay, I will”
When a hung over sailor called Bill,
Met an opera singer rather shrill,
He said “If you pipe down
I’ll give all that I own”,
And the girl replied, “okay, I will”
When a hung over sailor called Bill,
Met an opera singer rather shrill,
He said “If you pipe down
I’ll give all that I own”,
And the girl replied, “okay, I will”
When a hung over sailor called Bill,
Met an opera singer rather shrill,
He said “If you pipe down
I’ll give all that I own”,
And the girl replied, “okay, I will”
When a hung over sailor called Bill,
Met an opera singer rather shrill,
He said “If you pipe down
I’ll give all that I own”,
And the girl replied, “okay, I will”
When a hung over sailor called Bill,
Met an opera singer rather shrill,
He said “If you pipe down
I’ll give all that I own”,
And the girl replied, “okay, I will”
When a hung over sailor called Bill,
Met an opera singer rather shrill,
He said “If you pipe down
I’ll give all that I own”,
And the girl replied, “okay, I will”

Hi Pete is it the same stanza repeated 10-11 times or is there slight difference that I can’t spot?
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Hi Sadje, it’s just repeated, for the prompt.
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I read the others comments and the Penny dropped! Got it now
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LOL Finally got it. THe prompt is repetitive.
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Yep, you got it. The verse is just the normal rubbish.
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She did repeat and repeat her shrillness. I wonder if they ever married?
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she sounds too considerate for marriage 🤣
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too smart for marriage
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Highly effective response for the prompt.
Highly effective response for the prompt.
Highly effective response for the prompt.
Highly effective response for the prompt.
I could go on, but that would be repetitive.
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brilliant…
spared.
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👏👏👏👏👏
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I loved the first stanza; not so keen on the last one! 😂
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ah but did you spot the difference?
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😂 No!
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Me neither!
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I just copied the same verse, like, ten times over, but hadn’t realised that people would look through them to see if there actually were any differences. I feel ever so cruel.
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🤣 Brilliant!
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In a kinda Dr Strangelove kind of way.
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I feel like I just hit a hung-over Ground Hog day 🙂
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Spot on!!!👏👏
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Clever bastard! 🙂
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Just too good my friend, too good! 🤪🖤
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