
For Fandango’s Flash Fiction Challenge #175, based on the image below from ShutterStock.
With barely a ripple, she inched herself out of the large pond, but meeting the white down of a roosting Aylesbury duck, she swiftly bade her retreat. The fewer creatures that knew of her presence, the better.
Appearing from the black water a short distance away, her wiry frame beached itself silently. Only the slightest glint of moonlight, reflecting from her onyx wetsuit, would alert anybody to her presence. But nobody was watching. With her naked eye, she spotted them, laughing around the campfire. Not a clue. Even that blasted duck remained asleep.
Stealthily, she edged open a waterproof pocket. A pair of night-vision goggles were revealed. With practised hand, she drew them deftly over her spiky hair. Flicking them on, her world irradiated with a dull green hue. She studied the campers, but winced as the direct firelight flared the lens. Ripping off the goggles, this would have to be done unaided. But no matter. Seemingly drunk, the four remained oblivious.
Unsheathing a nine-inch blade from the scabbard on her midriff, this was going to be easy.
A friend once told me that there were no female mass murderers. There are now.
the amount of clarity in your sentences is amazing.
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thanks buddy
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Welcome. I kinda try to learn from you as well.
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aw, man, if I wasn’t so drunk I would blush!
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😁😁
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oooh, interesting. Funny must be the moon! That is what I have been reading about. Strangely, throughout history
there are more than people think.
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now why doesn’t trhat surprise me?
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Ooh love it!
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Wow, that worked so well. I’m beginning to think these campers aren’t going to survive this prompt 😳
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What can I say? I got up on the wrong side this morning!
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Delightfully dark my friend 👍🖤
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I thought you might appreciate it 🙂
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You know me well 😁🖤
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An intriguing tale. What was her motive?
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fire in an open space?
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🤨
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I do enjoy your dark side!
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this one has the makings of a decent movie 🤣
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