No reason. Just felt like writing and this is what came out.
My name is Heike Fiedler. I live with my husband, Mark, in a small town in Bavaria. On its outskirts, our town boasts a boutique hotel, set in the old castle. Far from being a medieval fortress, the castle was built in the nineteenth century. It is not authentic, but it looks the part. My best friend’s daughter, Sylvie, works there and she is forever telling us which famous name dropped by since last time, to enjoy the privacy of this luxury hideaway.
My husband is a good man, somebody I have grown to love more over the years. In front of me, I see a kind and thoughtful man, even if he has lost some of his athleticism over the years. The only people in the world that I might love more, if that were possible, are our two wonderful children. To underline his thoughtfulness, we celebrated our thirtieth wedding anniversary earlier this year, when Mark presented me with a weekend at this luxury retreat. “With the help of Sylvie”, he had muttered – I well knew that a night in this place cost most of my month’s salary.
On the appointed day, I had taken time off work and waited impatiently to leave our house. The hotel had said that check-in was at 2pm, and we arrived there shortly afterwards. We were able to drive the few miles to the hotel in no time at all. Our ten-year-old car looked distinctly out of place in the car park, as I saw a bright red sports car in there, already lounging about. I’m no good with cars, but this one had a horse emblem on its bonnet. There was another- the colour was striking, a real banana yellow. And, oh so big, for what looked like just two seats. “Come on”, I hurried Mark, who would happily have stayed to admire these cars, “let’s check into the room and we can find the spa”.
Sylvie had again done us proud. Though Mark had sworn that he had paid only for an “ordinary” room, we were presented with the key to the Honeymoon Suite. We left our things there – Mark would have happily watched what looked like a hundred-inch cinema-tv, but I wanted to try the spa. Sylvie was not finished yet, as when we arrived at the spa, we were told that a sea-mineral therapy had also been booked for us. As I looked at him quizzically, Mark just winked at me.
Three hours later, I looked at my watch. Almost 6 o’clock. “We’d better head back soon”, urged Mark, “we need to make ourselves presentable in time for dinner”. Reluctantly, I dragged myself away from my sunbed. “Can we go back via the car? I need to pick something up from there.”
In the car park, Mark was just locking up as we watched a limousine enter. Gleaming black, brand new, like it had just been driven from the showroom, we hung back to see whether anybody famous would emerge from behind that tinted glass. A figure emerged which I recognised as Karl Jaeger. Jaeger was famous, not in Germany, but in our next-door neighbour. In fact, as a popular, far-right career politician, he had almost become Premier in their last elections. Repeatedly, he had used the phrase, “the wolves are gathering for the feast”, a direct reference to his country’s influx of refugees, so much so that the two had become synonymous. “Come on, let’s go get ready”, I ushered Mark, Jaeger was not a man to my taste.
Two hours later, and we are ushered into the restaurant. The waiters could not be any more polite, and I was left to marvel how money could buy such lovely surroundings. As we are shown to our table, Jaeger is seated at the next table, in a party of four men. As I settle into my antique chair, the place is a who’s who of faces I recognise. Nearby I see a famous German football star, presumably out with his wife or girlfriend. Her figure does not look at all natural.
A waiter comes, serves an hors d’oeuvre. We thank him, and he responds with an accent which clearly is not German.
I cannot remember a better meal – this really is an occasion to remember – when suddenly I hear a disturbance from Jaeger’s table. The men, who had been raucous all evening seemed to have focussed their attention on our waiter. My normally quiet husband spoke up: “do you mind? We’re trying to enjoy our anniversary here.” “Relax, old man. It is only this useless waiter. Don’t you realise that he’s another one? That the wolves are gathering for the feast?” His famous catchphrase.
“Yes, I saw them gathering outside, next to your new Audi.” I have never been so proud of my husband.
Have you watched Talking Heads? I think you might enjoy it.
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I’ve heard them, but never knew it was a film.
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Oh, it’s a tv series. This post just reminded me of it.
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Is there a second part? Have a nice day 🌈🌺🌸🌼
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I don’t know yet. At first I felt it was enough to highlight his riches built thanks to his politics, and his lifestyle built by immigrants, but I think it did end a bit abruptly. Tomorrow promises to be a quiet day, so maybe then…
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Monday. It is my first time writing that type of story so be gentle with me! https://mrbump.uk/2020/11/09/come-uppance/
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Loved it P and looking forward to more 🙂
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Nice one!
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Lovely. Not where I thought you were going, but I like your version much better. Well done. I suggest you more often indulge in these pleasant creative asides.
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Funnily enough I awoke with the ending in my head and just thought it forward. It’s fascinating that the ofder in which we think all this is the opposite to the order in which we write it down.
If anything once I’d fleshed the rest out, the ending was a bit weak.
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Disagree on the “weakness” of the ending. Ending was pretty swift. Not exactly in-line with the preamble, but all the better to catch you unawares, my dear.
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I know you’ve embrace poetry and I remember when you once said you don’t like to write fiction. But you are actually quite good at it!
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One thing I’m learning is “never say never”. My blog is very different to 3 years ago.
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I agree with Fandango, your fiction is so engaging and enjoyable to read! I want to read more 😛
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Thanks. Farida asked me if there was going to be another part so I might have to write one. The racist b gotta cop something nasty. I love how I can put hidden payloads into stories.
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Monday.
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