
A Happy Valentine’s Day to all my readers. I thought I’d celebrate with a traditional Shakespearean sonnet. What do you think?
Your Venus form compelled the angels weep,
Your soft caress reduced me to my knees,
Became my dream, enhancing deepest sleep,
My lifelong goal, to honour and to please.
Forged close, as one, we weathered winter’s squalls,
Your loving smile was ample for reward,
Your willing servant, aiding on your call,
An orchestra which played the sweetest chords.
Once past my prime, though, love did not suffice,
Devoted years tossed valueless to nought,
No pleas reduced you, softened or enticed,
I forge alone, a distant afterthought.
If you’d but known, the trophy of the pack,
If I’d but known, your viperous heart of black.
Nice sonnet pete!
Happy valentines day! ❤
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Ah, hindsight. And still we seek connection through love in its many forms. I have a cat who bites me when he’s feeling lovey-dovey, and an SO who tempts me with evil things in order for me to allow him his vices (overlook, ignore, or simply sigh). It seems there’s always a price to pay, but I’d draw the line at a viperous heart.
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Ha!
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Seriously, it ain’t worth it
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The backlash!
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Great share Pete. Thanks
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This was pretty freaking awesome! Happy VD 🤣 💝
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and to you. Gotta go for chocolate today!
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Def!
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Aren’t you full of surprises! A sonnet no less. ♥️
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I don’t write many. I went for the straightforward option todayalthough I prefer Petrarchan.
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Sonnets of all sorts scare me.
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Writing a sonnet is easy. Just in terms of technical: iambic pentameter and a set rhyme scheme, depending on what type I choose.
But writing a good sonnet is difficult. I worry about the overall story I’m telling. Each quatrain (the first three quatrains) has a purpose, and the last couplet is kinda a summary. It’s a hard write in the sense that I have a fixed number of lines/syllables so every word has to compete for inclusion.
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Happy Valentine’s Day. 😊
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not one I particularly observe.
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Well I love it, obviously 😉🖤
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Whatever else happens we need to be self-sufficient.
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Indeed we do 👍🖤
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